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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development .

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Earlier students did their
further
 education in their home country , but now they have a tendency to study oversea . Today , I am going to discuss
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 and cons of
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 improvement for many aspects not only education but
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 society.
To begin
 with, the foremost benefit of
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 way is that students get to interact with different kinds of people and learn about new cultures and languages.
Hence
, it is a great opportunity to enhance knowledge and perspective .
For example
, some oversea students
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 MIT university said to me that they had more chances to practice and approach to new modern technology.
Furthermore
 , studying abroad is more respectable and easier to get
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ell-paid job .
On the other hand
 , there are some drawbacks including that abroad students
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 to face many popular
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Firstly
, you never thought you would say it, but you actually have homesickness with expressions
such
 as missing your mother’s dishes, missing your baby sister...Unfortunately, it is not all , another problem is that time zone difference will annoy them and make them feel exhausted and bothered . More importantly ,
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versea student can struggle with
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anguage barrier which most of them have when they go to other countries. In conclusion, students did a university degree in foreign countries have both
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ositive aspect and problem. The main advantage is that the students get to learn a lot of new things while studying abroad. The main disadvantage is that they may choose not to return to their country and
thus
 fail to contribute to its development.
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