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Some say that electronics books will make traditional books disappear in the future. DO you agree or disagree?

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The advancement of technology has brought a change in the way people read books. Nowadays, there is an increasing number of individual who prefer electronics books over the traditional one. Some say that traditional
book
 will disappear in the
future
 and modern e-books will totally replace it. In my point of view,
although
 e-books will cause a tremendous decrease in traditional
book
 users, it will not totally eradicate its existence in the
future
. The underlying reason why electronics books will dramatically conventional
book
 users is its convenience and cheap
price
. E-books are saved in gadgets
such
 as cellular phones and tablet. They come in lightweight, usually less than five hundred grams, which make
then
 easy to carry anytime and anywhere. They can
also
 save a ton of books and can be accessed by just a click of a finger.
Also
, purchasing an e-
book
 is not only easy but
also
 come at a low
price
.
This
 phenomenon can be seen in Samsung tablet users, they can purchase a
book
 in google store under a
price
 of 50 dollars and transaction can be done in a minute.
In contrast
,
t
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raditional
book
 comes at a hefty
price
 and usually,a visit to
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ook shop or time-consuming freight is a must before it is at hand.
On the other hand
, though the popularity of e-books will surpass the conventional
book
 in the
future
, its circulation will not halt in the foreseen
future
.
This
 is because there are a number of people who are accustomed to the traditional way of reading. Individuals who are aged from 40 and above,
for example
, most of them love to read in physical books because it does not cause eye fatigue,unlike e-books that usually causes pain in the eye
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especially when reading for a long period of time. Another reason why others cannot simply put aside the traditional
book
 is the good feeling of holding books. There is a psychological effect of physically holding the pages of the
book
. Some people say that they have more connection with it when compared to reading in modern electronics books. In conclusion, It is apparent that electronic books will be more popular in the
future
 because of it is very convenient to use and low
price
, but it will not totally phase out the physical books because of people who prefer the old fashion of reading it.
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