It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use teach good behavior to children?

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reasons. It is argued that the awareness of children on

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ifference between

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ense of right and wrong is vital and

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punishing has a significant effect to ensure to teach them the capability of differentiation. In my opinion, whatever is

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atter, the

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children

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. The

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in regardless of its types could cause detrimental consequences

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as trauma and other psychological effects in

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, the studies conducted with adults depict that the majority of adults having

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psychological problems as well as criminal patterns are the people who exposed the punishing measures in early childhood. While the major part of the modern society is expecting to have

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ositive effect of

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, all measures considered as

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tools cause more deterioration than

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ncrease on children`s

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of right and wrong. Lenient measures can be privileged in comparison with the

penalty

due to its most effective results on the children lifestyle.

For example

, if the parents and teachers use the soft measures

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as effective explanations to teach the children moral

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, in result, they can obtain not only information about variation between right and wrong

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but

also

they can acquire to value the events and

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people, results of correct decisions and etc.

However

, the children growing up beneath

punishment

patterns have more aggression and

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kind of children can get used to

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punished after some period of time,

consequently

, the

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can be a reason for recidivist

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of the children. In conclusion,

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there is a strong idea that the

penalty

is substantial to provide children`s learning of disparity between moral and unethical senses, I entirely disagree with that deteriorating tool and strongly support more soft measures which can impact the children with more positive methods.