It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use teach good behavior to children?

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in regardless of its types could cause detrimental consequences

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as trauma and other psychological effects in

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psychological problems as well as criminal patterns are the people who exposed the punishing measures in early childhood. While the major part of the modern society is expecting to have

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, all measures considered as

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tools cause more deterioration than

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ncrease on children`s

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of right and wrong. Lenient measures can be privileged in comparison with the

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due to its most effective results on the children lifestyle.

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, if the parents and teachers use the soft measures

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as effective explanations to teach the children moral

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, in result, they can obtain not only information about variation between right and wrong

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they can acquire to value the events and

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people, results of correct decisions and etc.

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, the children growing up beneath

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patterns have more aggression and

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kind of children can get used to

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punished after some period of time,

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, the

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can be a reason for recidivist

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of the children. In conclusion,

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there is a strong idea that the

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is substantial to provide children`s learning of disparity between moral and unethical senses, I entirely disagree with that deteriorating tool and strongly support more soft measures which can impact the children with more positive methods.