All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of holidays in a year or people doing different jobs enjoy different amounts of holiday time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays the companies have much more hierarchy than they used to have. While some people support the idea of
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employees should have more benefits, others believe that all the collaborators within a company should be treated equally. I completely agree with the latter statement and in
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I will support my view with some arguments. One thing that has changed in the
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decades is the number of roles within the same company . While years ago used to have only one individual accountable for a specific job, nowadays it seems to have a different specialized employee for each of the tasks that compose that job. To illustrate
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, in the past a web designer was responsible for making all the
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needed to release a website, and now most companies prefer to hire a designer, a developer and a digital marketing analyst to accomplish that same job.
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could be an issue because some people naturally end up having more
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than others, but it should be solved by offering a better wage for those, not more benefits
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, the sense of equality could be spread through the teams and collaborators can become more motivated. Another relevant subject to be considered is the amount of
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people spend in the workplaces .
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some managers have to
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the most relevant decisions, sometimes they
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hours than individuals filled in
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positions. If these superiors that already have better salaries could
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have more
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off than the others, just because of their roles, some of the corporation's valuable assets could start feeling uncomfortable and think the enterprise is not a fair place to develop their careers. A harmful consequence of
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could be the exit of these important employees and the rise of a bad reputation related to the company. In conclusion, despite some collaborators may have better roles,
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harder and longer than other teammates, there are several ways of privileging them. In my opinion, for the reasons explicit above, holiday
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should be equal to everyone.
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