some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The computers are paying
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ajor role in public life in today's world. Now, it is open a debate that more often using computers and phones for communication, could be put
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egative effect on their reading and writing skills, especially on youngsters. I positively believe in
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auto-correct software because of
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young generation are not care about spelling and due to
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hort form of meaning would be affected
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their writing skills.
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one research was done by oxford university, they divided two
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of students. one group are using the electronics gadgets for communication and others are using
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raditional method for that. After the 6
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, they have to write and read for an hour about essay and read in front of
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lass. The result was shocking, the group are hesitated and make more mistake in
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raditional method were getting more interest
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reading book compare to another
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ew thing but they forgot to see the side effect on them, even though they are realising about it. They are ignored about it. The government should put
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ye on it and if it has more negative, they should improve it before it is getting late.
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