There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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this

big world, there are a lot of countries have their own

culture

and custom, which they follow. Some people have an opinion that whenever the group of the mob are going to visit any

country

then

they should behave according to their customs. But in my opinion, I think customs represent

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ountry, and when people are visiting any

country

, I don't think so it's going to influence in any negative way.

Firstly

, As we are all aware that nowadays any specific

country

's food

culture

and clothing styles have to become popular across the world. What I mean is people are liking and following

this

trend of food and attire. But I think cuisine has most influenced to bring in their home

country

in demand.

For example

, Chinese noodles, a Mexican burrito, Italian pasta or pizza those are the more bid in the subsistence things. And

this

way, I think

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emphasize people to exchange

culture

and customs.

On the other hand

, there are many festivals has become more popular across the world. As we have seen in India that most festivals celebrated by India only.

However

, there are many festivals, which is not part of our Indian

culture

have been following since a couple of years.

For example

, Halloween, Happy easter and valentine's day.

However

, these celebration days has embellished conspicuous trend nowadays. Especially Our Juvenile is most modify. In conclusion, I think people have swapped their

culture

and customs, which is a good sign of strong bonding between the two countries.

Nevertheless

has no side effects of any

culture

to bring in a home

country

. But if some people have suggestions to behave according to their customs while travelling, I think it's up to each person thinking, as a custom is not the barrier anywhere to interact.

Submitted by Neha Saini on Sat Oct 03 2020

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