Many people think that students should be allowed to choose the subjects that they study in school, whereas others feel that they should study a set curriculum. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

many people think that students should be allowed to choose the subjects that they study in

school

, whereas others feel that they should study a set

curriculum

. discuss both views and give your opinion. choosing

of

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school

subjects recommended done by students that thinking of some people. on the other side, people have a notion on that topic in contrary view so students have to stick on their studying

curriculum

which is obtained by their

school

.

this

essay will examine both sides of the argument and provide an overall opinion. generally speaking, there is a number of reasons why believe people that students have a chance to select their subjects. perhaps the main reason why people think that students who can opt their subjects

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because they find a chance to select their interested subjects,

thus

, they may have a more

concentrations

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concentration

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of their classes that

brings

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up happy students profile who love to go

school

every day, no compliment about

school

and more achievement on their subjects. despite these arguments, many people feel that students have to stick their

curriculum

which

provide

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by their

school

. students always looking for their

favorite

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favourite

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classes but if you don’t get fundamental of computers

then

you cannot

success

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in advanced computers class which provide set out a gaming project.

school

always obtain an experienced

curriculum

which suitable for every

students

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student

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.

however

, it may

causes

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some students who have no interest

with

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a subject but have to take

these

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subject and

then

they can distract other classmates and teacher with their attitudes. ın conclusion, it must be said that

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election of their

curriculum

or no selection

have

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become a complex issue with no easy solutions. personally, ı prefer to students have

a

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opportunity to select their subjects with pre-information which is provided by ancient students that will give

a

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more energy to easily focus on their subjects. ıf government want to do

that is

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roject,

first

of all

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they have to

trial

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on a pilot

school

then

with knowledge acquisition on that project they may apply

other

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another school

other schools

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school

efficiently.