You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. You should write at least 150 words.

#goods #shop #town #prices

Dear Mr.

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John

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, I am writing

this

letter to know about an electronic appliance I am planning to buy soon. I am your former client.

Last

month, I had purchased an Onida fridge from your store, and it was a great experience I had with your shop. I am looking for a newly launched Hitachi five-star window Ac, which has special features to automatic temperature setting as well as touchscreen remote and a pack of 1000 LED bulbs of 100 watts. Currently, I am living in Lakhnow, so I have searched for the AC model a lot but did not get anywhere, and the LED bulbs were overpriced.

Besides

, I would be grateful if you let me know if you have

this

particular model of AC and bulbs as well as the price.

Moreover

, Could I make the online payment? In case it is available. For any confirmation, you can call me on my mobile number 9728263868. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Ellen

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