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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measure are required.

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People have to maintain their physical
health
 lifetime, and the government should support them by obtaining the required facilities. Parents, psychologists and policymakers often debate if enhancing the sports facilities will help the public to maintain their
health
, or there are some other facilities in which authorities can
work
.
This
 essay will explore both the arguments and provide detailed analysis to aid readers to come to their conclusion. A few observations offer support to consider that increasing the number of sports facilities will behave as a beneficial option. One supportive argument states that these facilities allow the human to play outdoor games. As nowadays people are soo busy in their hectic lifestyle that they cannot even get the time of walking or sometimes they are too tired that ignore their fitness. Every person like games, but because of the lack of facilities or motivation, they find it unnecessary.
However
, If government build more playgrounds or provide required equipment’s,
then
 people get motivated and start finding the interest in sports which will not only improve their
health
 but
also
 provide new athletes to the country. Despite the above arguments, some could say that working on other measures will
also
 improve public
health
. Like because of the increase in vehicles, people did not get the place to walk, so authorities should
work
 on building new parks or provide separate lanes on roads to the walkers.
Moreover
, they can
also
 provide the separate lane for cycling people as because of increase in cars, trucks or oversized vehicles; people did not find safe travelling through the cycle that’s why nowadays people avoid cycles. Not only lanes separation but authorities should have to
work
 on pollution problems as it will
also
 affecting the human’s
health
. Undoubtedly, authorities have to
work
 on all the measure which will help in improve public
health
 as it is said: “
Health
 is Wealth”. Both the points have their advantages, so there is nothing like more or less.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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