You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Einstein, I am writing to provide you with the essential tips and advice regarding
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camping holidays. There are endless activities that you will definitely enjoy while camping. Since it is your
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time camping take some time to go hiking and see amazing nature spots. While hiking, nearby rivers may allow for very fun activities
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as swimming and fishing. Being out in the wild may have a few disadvantages. The environment may rise a few challenges as undesired insects as well as weather and temperature swings.
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, you must be ready and equipped with insect-proof tents to prevent intrusion as well as portable heaters in case of unexpectedly cold weather. I would love to go camping with you
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summer as it has been my main hobby for years. My knowledge of camping sites in Southern Ontario, and experience would bring great lessons to you. Please let me know what location and possibly when you are planning to go camping. Yours truly, Giovanne Lucas
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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