Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few generations ago almost all
food
that citizens of each
country
ate was produced themselves. These days more than 90
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of the
food
is imported. In my view,
this
is a negative phenomenon, while producing
o
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their
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wn foodstuffs can improve people's health and an economy of the
country
.
Firstly
, sustenance is not only energy and satisfaction
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but
also
our health. Eating three meals a day we, unfortunately, do not have knowledge of where that
food
comes from and how farmed was. We all understand
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that foodstuff is often packed, repacked, refrigerated, sold, and resold many times over. Worse still, big agricultural and farming companies use chemical fertilizes and antibiotics being forced by the economic system into intensifying their production. I reckon, that
prodacts
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products
growing on local farms are always better, have more
flavor
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and nutritional values. Farmers, in their turns, are taking care of
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and,
for example
, using organic and traditional methods of growing, what is good for future crops and future generations.
Secondly
, importing impacts negatively on the economic condition of the
country
. In my opinion, states should build their own
food
system. The reason is that local business
own
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somebody, who is local, who spends money locally,
payes
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pays
taxes locally, and employs local people. Money,
therefore
, circulates within the
country
and increases the economy.
That is
why
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I wish, the shelves were laid by national goods. In conclusion, from my point of view, people should support indigenous farmers and small
food
businesses. I agree that countries should produce the
food
to feed their population themselves, because it may
has
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a positive impact on the health of citizens and
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conomy of the state as well.
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