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Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

#schools #phones #development
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the usage of mobile phones
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 limited in educational institutions.
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 these devices can play a significant role in safety, connectedness and even in learning. In my point of view
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 is a positive step and can bring benefits not only academic but
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 physical and social aspects too.
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lassroom itself helps in improving learning.
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 is simply because without these devices there are far fewer distractions for teachers and students.
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, when a student has a cell phone on his lap or pocket there will be a constant urge to look for new messages.
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 it affects the other students and teachers by distracting with the sound and actions, which can have long term effects on academic progress. A complete ban on mobile phones during class free learners from
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 campus will improve the physical and social activities of the students. In the time of lunch break
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they may play sports, games or simply sit and chat together, activities what are far healthier than sitting alone over a screen. Without limited enforced by the school children simply can't draw the line on their phone
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healthier. To
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, phones are a part of our modern lives, I strongly feel that their
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 in schools should be limited. With firm boundaries and ban in some situations, students are able to learn better, strengthen friendships and engage in healthier pursuits.
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