Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development.

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It is irrefutable that the modernization has changed the individual's attitude towards each other. A certain segment of the society believes that

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development of

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has affected positively to the individual's behaviour, while other opine that

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leads to negative aspects. I would like to delve into both the argument before forming an opinion.

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irst and the predominant reason,

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in today's modern era has made human life easy. An individual can communicate with each other from vast distances through communication devices

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as mobile phones and radios.

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the

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reduced the physical activities job for humans and saves time. The difficult jobs that an individual is unable to do, that work easy for machines.

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, people usually wash clothes in washing machines which saves time and energy. Moving

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, there are some negative aspects of human life. The

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has led to change

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the behaviour of a human. The vast distance communication has led to bad

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behaviour with each other. The person talks on the mobile phone comfortably but faces problems in

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interaction

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interaction

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the person feels uncomfortable and nervous.

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it concludes that

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has affected the human

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which each other more negatively than making individual live easily in

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ositive manner.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

225 words

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virtual relationships
social media
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family dynamics
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crimes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?