Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Smith, I am Criss Pell, your immediate neighbours of sunrise apartment living in 3rd floor, recently
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got your complaint about some unpleasant noise came from my flat, I write
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letter to apologise for any inconvenience caused. As I am working in HSBC Bank as a Branch Manager, I got transferred from Glasgow and I supposed to join London Hounslow branch from 1st of April on immediate base.
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I got only five days for packing and moving my whole stuff,
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to some furniture,refurbishment needs to be done before the 1st of April.
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my carpenter decided to stay and try to finish furniture work before the timeline. so machinery of wooden cutting made the noise which could disturb neighbours around me, for that I took permission from society association. I would be requesting you to bear with me for only
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2 days.
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to all machine work should be done before 6 in the evening, so it would be convenient for residence. Once again accept my apology for any inconvenience caused. yours faithfully, Criss Pell.
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