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Some people think that families have the most powerful influence on a child’s development, while others think other factors such as television, friend, music. etc. gave biggest effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is believed by certain individuals that families have the strongest influences on a child's evolution and others said there are different factors affecting it. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in
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 technology era, we cannot deny the role of TV or friends in children's social and cognitive increase in both positive and negative directions. In today's sophisticated era, it is difficult to avoid children's daily activities from the influence of various existing technologies.
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, a child cannot be separated from entertainment called television, which is the film or series he watches on TV channels. They saw how the actors acted as heroes to fight crime.
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, it is often to see fighting scenes are shown, as the result, the children bring them to real life and injure their friends . In the other hand, parents are a place where the children spend most of their time. Parents' role in guiding and encouraging the advancement of their children cannot be underestimated. To illustrate, parents are role models for their children almost in every aspect of life.
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, they will advise and direct their children when they behave defiantly. Paying special attention to education and serving nutritious food are concrete examples that we always encounter . In conclusion, every part in children's life has
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mpact on their developments, whether the parent's, television and friends.
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, I believe that parents' impacts on their children's improvement were most heavy than other effects.
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