Some companies have rules that forbid employees from using personal cell phones during working hours. Do you think this is a good idea? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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, I think it is a good idea, how companies have forbidden

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phones for their employees. I feel

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a bit

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attention,

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a huge factory,

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accident or die. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of

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, one year ago, I was driving and typing a message in my

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accident.

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decreasing production of

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a lot of time using

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, he can generate a delay in projects or

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ompany and, a terrible environment between chairman and employees. In conclusion, I strongly believe that companies must put emphasis

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yours

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rules, about the

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rules don´t

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, many accidents can occur and the productivity can decrease.