Home is the basic necessity of everyone. A government should provide home to those who cannot afford it. To what extent you agree or disagree

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Presently, living cost is so high.
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influence can even be seen in the house price as well. It is sometimes thought that the poverty-stricken people are financially assisted by the government authority since
this
is one of the basic requirements and I support
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view. A safe living atmosphere
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them from many dangers and instil self-confidence
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when the nation assists the needy people to build their home will be analysed to prove. The primary reason why I think the authority ought to help poor citizens because they are vulnerable to many
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if they are on
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treets.
In other words
, by providing a safe shelter or place called home would save them from potential threats; robbery, physical or sexual abuse, and so on.
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nti-social group to earn money in a short way, eventually, their life may be tarnished irreversible.
For instance
, in a documentary called homeless, which
expained
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explained
how difficult to live in
such
a situation,
that is
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traumatic
and painful. Another reason to construct affordable housings for the homeless is that it would boost their morale. Since they can earn respect and
accepatance
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acceptance
from society and they feel good about themselves and can keep their belongings and valuables in a safe place.
For example
, in India, people who live below the poverty line have been given houses at a reasonable rate.
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they can stay in one place rather than moving, which, eventually, assists them to find a secure job and pay their bills by self. Slowly and gradually, the country itself moves forward and can ensure a good standard of living to its people. In conclusion, by ensuring affordable housing facility for the poor, they feel more secure and out of danger along with self-respect. It is highly recommended that every country in the world should make a policy, which offers homes for all.
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