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Success is often associated with the achievement of the wealth, position, honours, or fame that have come about through hard work. Is success in life earned or do people succeed just because they are lucky?

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As everybody knows that prosperity comes by doing hard struggle.A successful person can be accomplished to wealth,positions and popularity in his
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 by doing potential efforts.To earn the success
one
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 needs to do hard
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 and passion towards his
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.There are very fewer chances who become successful due to luckiness.
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 essay will examine the statement in the following writing. To commence with, there is no easy way to get the achievement into
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 unless the person is lucky.
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 of all, to get a good position in the job industry
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 has to do a good performance.Success factors are connected to each other.
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, an individual who starts from the beginning level will go up by showing the
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 performance and loyaityness respectively.There is no chance to get a direct higher promotion in the organization with a certain period of time.Unless the person is educated or well experienced it's hard to earn the achievement.
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,there are some other ways by which
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 can achieve a big target in his
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.
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,some people do not want to spend too much time to get promoted in order to reach the managerial level. They like to spend much time on their study and passed the government exams and directly gets the managerial level position.So it's hard to say that without doing the efforts
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 can achieve wealth and honours.There are many people who are supported by their family,can get good jobs easily by putting the reference. To conclude,
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 having a luckiness is a different thing but the appropriate way to achieve the targets of
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 is a hard job due to
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 can earn anything
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 as good positions ,wealth and honours.So that I recommend to everyone's belief in your self and do the hard
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 ,without thinking about short ways to get success.
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