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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

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Agriculture is a very important sector of the
world
. Human civilisation started after the invention of the agricultural profession.
Food
 comes under basic needs for instant, water, clothing and shelter. Human started agriculture from 3000 years ago. Riverbanks areas like India, China & Iraq are the
first
 who taught agriculture to the
world
. The process of human socialisation started after
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nvention of agriculture. Today every
country
 has aa good amount of supermarkets to sell
food
 products. Humans have a long history of selling
food
 products. If supermarkets only sell
food
 produced from within their own
country
 rather than import from overseas in that case that
world
 will be restricted in various manners,
for instance
, Potato, Tomato was only
initially
 produced by Spain but due to transport and supermarkets
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everybody can now use it in their regular diet. Another example is Tea which is discovered by Chinese farmers, today almost every
country
 in the
world
 has availability of tea due to supermarkets. It gives you the best of all
food
 products available in the
world
. People can taste
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ariety of things which are available in different countries. In the other words, people now taste distinct
food
 cultures.
On the other hand
 availability of a variety of products from distinct countries in the supermarkets makes local farmers life more stressful because of the availability of similar products at low cost from a different
country
. Supermarkets owners always prefer good quality lower-cost
food
 products.
Hence
, In my opinion, supermarkets should not only sell
food
 produced from within their own
country
.
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