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The diagram illustrates six varieties of writing systems spread throughout the world. According to the diagram, in the Logographic
system
,
one
 character equals
one
 word. Interestingly, since each character represents a word meaning, it is possible for two languages with different spoken forms to share the same writing
system
. It is the case for Chinese and Japanese,
for example
. There are four types of writing systems based on sounds. Specifically, In these systems, each letter represents a sound. The oldest of these is the Abjad
System
, in that each character is equal to
one
 consonant sound.
For instance
, Arabic uses
this
 type of
system
 to write. Related to
this
 is the Abjuda
system
. In
this
 case,
one
 consonant and vowel sound is written as
one
 letter.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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