You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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letter in the hope that you will help me with the problem regarding the
camera
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recently bought. On 20th September 2020 , I bought a DSLR
Camera
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worth Rs.40,000 from Pune Highway mall where the sale was on the electronic products and others too. After buying, I started travelling toward Mumbai. While travelling I didn't check the box or unboxed it. I didn't open that box on the same day as I was exhausted.But when I unboxed the
Camera
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I noticed that the
camera
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battery is missing from the box. The palace where the battery is empty. I requested you to help me with
this
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case as I am not returning to Pune. You are representative over there so that you can help me to get back my
camera
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battery. I would be grateful if you could help me. I attached my invoice and the details with
this
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 mail. Look forward to getting help from you. Yours Faithfully, Surekha Kamble
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • local representative
  • important items missing
  • purchase details
  • model and brand
  • missing accessories
  • inconvenience
  • use to its full extent
  • urgent request
  • partial refund
  • alternative solution
  • exchange unit
  • correct the issue
  • look forward to your prompt response
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