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Historical objects should be brought back their country of origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The thing which has
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extra ordinary
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 value in history ought to return in their
birth place
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.
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 carries
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ation’s representations .
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country
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 which is if
any one
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 born in a
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 , he will be the get citizen of
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country
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.
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if anything was made by a
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have
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stay
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on
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 that
country
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kohinur
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Kohinoor
 diamond was
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 found in
india
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 ,
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 it should be in
india
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 .Indeed is it happened ? Though
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this
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rules
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is not exists
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 in
r
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eal world, it’s necessary to
changed
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. Opposite that , Conquer a city or
country
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 by other nation means that they are the owner of that
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 . According to
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they can take anything .
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british
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 and France museum
have
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 many
thing
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 which was collected from
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ifferent
country
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ime of colony government . people who disagree with
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 thoughts. In conclusion,
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aptured
country
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 should send back the staffs to
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ain origin .
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