The best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way of life for the sake of the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obviously, problems related to environmental degradation are rising day-by-day. Many people believe that by compromising a luxurious lifestyle, the present population can solve these problems creating better conditions for the future generation. In my opinion, less usage inorganic materials, technology and by being more responsibility towards our surroundings, society can resolve
this
issue. At
first
, one of the effective steps can be taken by making changes in people’s daily life activities. Rarely do people understand that many of us get indulged in those actions, which can be dangerous for our
environment
.
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, using
plastic
materials,
although
people are aware that
plastic
bags are harmful
for
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the
environment
, they still
use
plastic
bags and bottles.
In addition
, running some campaigns and spreading
the
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information about
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armful effects of using
plastic
things can save the earth. There is an efficient solution, take Japan
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for example
,
this
country has introduced the
use
of water plant decomposing without harming land or water. Water plants are quite enough good material for the production of common things
such
as bottles, bags and some packaging using daily. Consider another problem, the advent of technology is adversely affecting the
environment
. Demand for
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production
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is rising at an alarming level. Numerous productions work with minerals
such
as oil and coal, thereby
cause
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global warming. By using renewable energy
instead
of minerals, people currently can save our earth for
their
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next
generation. Modern wind turbines and solar panels are able to totally supply people’s demands with energy. To conclude, for
protection
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our
environment
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opulation should switch from
use
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natural minerals to renewable energy, and
also
all generation should
use
organic materials for
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ommon thing using daily.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Consumerism
  • Eco-friendly
  • Minimalism
  • Carbon footprint
  • Renewable resources
  • Conservation
  • Biodegradable
  • Deforestation
  • Emissions
  • Recycling
  • Upcycling
  • Sustainable development
  • Green technology
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecological balance
  • Overconsumption
  • Downshifting
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Climate change
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