Some people feel that increasing business and cultural contacts is a positive trend, other thinks that it leads to a loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

and investments have become widespread beyond the national borders leading to social interaction with different cultures. I
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diversity because
brings financial stability, while the critics feel that
would cause declining local cultures. There are many reasons why
development and cultural exchange occur when dealing with people outside the locality.
, Some products are highly profitable when sold outside a country. Technology gadgets and clothing fashions have high values in the international market, and
that is
why the USA made iPhone mobiles are more profitable in Asian countries. Simultaneously, the Chinese have controlled the west market in its cheaper electronic accessories and clothing.
, some locals and entrepreneurs tend to visit and explore different cultures and learn foreign languages to introduce their products in the international markets.
As a result
, the harmonious relationship builds globally, refraining people from conflicts and wars. That’s why
exploration brings positive outcomes.
On the other hand
movements result in the adaptation of foreign languages and traditions, which devastate the host culture. People forget their rituals, norms, and even their native language leading to loss of cultural identity.
In other words
, they handed over a new lifestyle to the
generation. Western culture dominancy in Asia is a clear example where the parents modernize their kids in western ways by speaking English, wearing western clothes, and attending night parties. To conclude, I believe that the interconnected world makes the economies stronger and brings peace;
is advisable to keep alive our local traditions as these are the assets of our past generations.
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