Some people think that children would benefit if they attend nursery school before primary school while some people think that children should stay all day with their families. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Nursery

school

is an important primary

school

for kids to learn the basic things at an early stage. According to the survey kids who attend the primary

school

are well mannered when compared to the kids who stay all day with the families. According to my point of view, kids should be sent to

nursery

schools to enhance their skills right from the starting of their education. At

first

, the

govrenment

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government

should implement a rule saying that " All the kids should be sent to the

nursery

school

before the primary

school

". Because

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kids of

this

generation are considered as the future of tomorrow's world. If the kids are habituated in going to

nursery

school

, they don't get scared of attending primary

school

, as they are already used

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attending the

school

.

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, the teachers can get to know about the

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interest and what they are capable of.

Secondly

, kids spending all day with families is not correct according to be. Because

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kids even need to learn things at the starting age of their life. If kids are sent to

nursery

school

, they will be trained

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how to respect others and how to behave. Moulding kids according to the community and today's world is very easy.

For instance

, if the kids of

this

generation are sent to

nursery

school

at

first

and

then

to the primary

school

, they are already aware of morals and ethics which helps them to communicate with the other person easily.

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, if the kids are directly sent to primary

school

they might be scared of looking at the new people around them. Which

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develops a fear in them and developing fear at

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very young age is

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anger for the kids.

Thus

I would conclude

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saying that, kids should always be sent to the

nursery

school

where they can learn new things and spend some quality time with new people around them.

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, it helps to

develope

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develop

their area of interest by the time

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go to

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primary

school

which itself mean that they already have a vision about their life, which helps them to succeed in

thier

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their

life at the very early stages.