Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

According to the survey, the wide variety of animal species found
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ancient times. Studies state that only
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of the wild animals are present in the whole world which
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available in the forests and
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medium
. Protecting the animals is our responsibility and one
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act
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there were
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of different species available in the forest. There were many factors for which the wild animals
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exists
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now among which one of the main reason was
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deforestation
.
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, keeping development in point of view a large amount of forest
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cut down. Considering the amazon forest, it was the shelter for
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uge variety of animals, due to cut down of
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arge amount of trees the survival of animals has become difficult which lead to death. The
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history
says that there were
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dinosaurs
in the forests but today, we can just see about the existence of them only in the books and their bones in the
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museum
medium
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. If
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wild
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life
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the internet and books. Investing time and money on
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wild
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life
animals is completely acceptable, they even resemble the pride of the nation.
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planning of budget should be done by the government in order to
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eradicate
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poverty as the increase in population is directly
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to economic wealth. The ruling party should take some valuable decisions so that they can spend the economy of the country both on human population and
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creatures.
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, during the World War period the soldiers used to consider horses as their main
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transportation
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eal world we just use only 10
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of them. Animals are
also
a part of humans
life
, their well being is our responsibility. I strongly conclude that
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it is every individual responsibility and
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accountability
to protect the
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life
and certain preventive measures should be taken by the government to control
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uman population and countries economy.
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  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem stability
  • pollination
  • water purification
  • climate regulation
  • eco-tourism
  • scientific research
  • moral and ethical responsibility
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • financial cost
  • social issues
  • healthcare
  • education
  • fund allocation
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