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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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In
this
 modern era,full of advancements in the facilities to mankind,still
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many people are not able to attain one meal in a day for survival.There are many causes of
this
 problem,which I will discuss in the following paragraphs.
First
 of all the main cause in the world since centuries which is enhancing is the rise in population.Over-population in the developing countries in today's contemporary world is the root cause that though advancement in the sector of agriculture,the produced
food
 is not enough to serve every person on
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lanet.
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developing country like India with the population of 132billion people,there is 26% of the population which is considered living under the
poverty
 line, facing the dreadful effects of not being able to get enough amount of
food
 to survive.
Secondly
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the taxes issued by the ruling government in the countries,on every
food
 item and the basic needs of the
human kind
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.It is very difficult for the people living below the
poverty
 lines or even the poor and
middle class
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 people to pay for taxes on the some of the basic facilities like water, electricity bills and
food
 required on daily basis to survive. To eradicate these problems government can take measures
such
 as enforcing citizens not to have more than two children in every family and making
food
 items tax-free and
also
 giving
food
 on
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ubsidised rate to certain category people
such
 as the ones living below the
poverty
 line. To conclude, though they are advancements in the technology aiding in the agriculture sector resulting in
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ncrease in the availability of
food
,there are other issues like overpopulation and
poverty
 which are to be eradicated gradually,so that produced
food
 can be made available to every human being on the planet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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