The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: – Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly – Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours – Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter about the automated garbage collection system which is installed in DLF phase 2, just before the road which leads to the locality’s bus station.

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the past 3 days, the processing of the dump is not getting completed. As per the inputs from the fellow residents, the machinery was working completely fine, till Monday evening.

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, it can be observed that the main wire which was connected to the socket is severely damaged. Due to the aforesaid issue, all the citizens, especially the elderly people are facing difficulty in breathing because the lid now stays open all the time. Thereby, inviting numerous insects and diseases.

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, the dumpster is overloaded

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, making the streets dirty. I sincerely urge you to kindly appoint some workmen who can offer some resolution. I,

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, completely understand that due to lockdown, the manpower is very less in urban areas.

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, it will be great if some temporary workaround can be made for time being,

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as emptying the dustbin and installing mobile bins as these can be removed easily once the previous system is up and running. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Regards, Swarnim

stripathi1992Wed Oct 07 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection schedule
overflow
accumulation
attracts pests
health hazards
unsightly appearance
foul odors
quality of life
reliable
frequent
community awareness programs
waste reduction
recycling
community composting solutions
organic waste
installation
public bins
strategic locations
littering
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