Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today’s world has reached the pinnacle of development.
This
generation is enjoying
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tmost comfortable
life
due to advanced technology.
However
, people have started exploiting nature with the extensive use of modern technology and it is hampering the
environment
adversely.
Thus
, I strongly believe that most people do not care enough about the environmental issue.
This
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ack of awareness but
also
people do not think much about it. As it does not affect their day
today
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life
directly. Extensive use of plastic, water, paper, increasing cement constructions
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major reasons for global warming. Plastic and tissues have become part of everyday
life
. We can see the existence of plastic everywhere, land as well as
sea
. Some countries dumbed their
waste
without proper segregation into the
sea
directly. Discarded fishing nets get dumped in the
sea
itself. Fishes, birds and animals end up eating
this
hazardous plastic ignorantly which results in ending up their
life
. Fishes,
sea
lions, turtles and other
sea
animals get tangled in the fishing net and stuck into it until they are rescued.
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arge number of forests are getting washed out
everyday
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. People are cutting trees for wood, making paper, medicinal purpose. People are not educated about
rainwater
harvesting. Every year a million gallons of
rainwater
get directed to
sea
and sewage.
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should make compulsory
rainwater
harvesting for each and every building. If not,
then
societies should be penalized for
such
offences. People as a part of social responsibility should
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iscipline for segregating
waste
into dry and wet. Every society should take initiatives of making compost with the
waste
. If followed effectively there would be less
waste
thrown on the dumping ground. For mining purpose trees are getting cut, mountains are getting excavated. There are not enough trees in nature to hold
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and due to cement
rainwater
is not absorbed in the land.
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so many new vehicles are landing on the street, which
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creating a lot of pollution in the air. All these alarming factors affect the
environment
. So, now is time people should take charge of their behaviour and should take responsibility towards the
environment
by planting more and more trees, less use of private vehicles, they should look at nature as part of them. Yes, if all the people will start
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these measures to save the
environment
, we can make it a better place for everybody and for our future generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collective action
  • climate change
  • rising sea levels
  • extreme weather events
  • biodiversity loss
  • ecosystems
  • Convention on Biological Diversity
  • significant improvements
  • sovereignty
  • environmental policies
  • international collaboration
  • environmental degradation
  • shared responsibility
  • technological advances
  • innovative solutions
  • international cooperation
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