Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wildlife is a significant part of our ecosystem,

however

as technology

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, many of

such

habitats are lost or destroyed.

While

some

people

argue that all wild species should be protected, others think that only a few should be prioritized. I concur

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the former thought, because every living creature is important, and it is our responsibility to preserve them. In

this

essay, we shall discuss these two topics

further

.

Firstly

, every living being deserves to live peacefully, and

hence

people

ought to preserve all wild species.

This

is because they benefit both us and the environment;

for example

, the hippos even though their size and appearance seem intimidating

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contribute immensely to the water supply of the forest by forming tributaries or pathways for rivers to return to the forest.

Moreover

,

the

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largest living creature to the smallest everyone contributes to our ecosystem

one

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way or another.

Secondly

, many forests and lands have been consumed by humans over time for agriculture or development.

Hence

, it indirectly falls on our

shoulder

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to provide shelter to the displaced animals.

As a result

,

people

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to assist and preserve every animal.

On the contrary

, some believe that a limited amount of creatures should be saved.

This

due

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to the fact

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animal preservation is expensive and time-consuming,

instead

people

should spend on other resources

such

as education, health or technology.

Furthermore

, it is practically impossible to sustain every wild animal and there are various problems around the corner;

for instance

, economies and health sectors are falling down tremendously worldwide, and countries should spruce these aspects in order to create a better livelihood for everyone.

Consequently

, individuals think that only a selected number of creatures should be prioritized. To summarize, there are two sides to an argument;

therefore

,

although

the opinion of saving some animals seems plausible, I opine that as

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human

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beings

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being

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we all ought to protect all wild animals.

Nevertheless

, wildlife plays a pivotal role in our planet’s well-being.