In the past, many people had skill such as making their own clothes and doing repair to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? how far is this situation true in your country?

Needless to say, in the

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century, a lot of individuals had various techniques

such

as creating wood furniture by themselves and making their own garments. But as our technology have been developing quickly in

this

day and age, those techniques have been fading. In

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I will attempt to outline the reason regarding

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topic and discuss the issue in my country. To commence with, no one can argue with the fact that technologies bring our life more convenience than the past, indeed. people purchase their own garments in the cloths shop

instead

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making by themselves. In

this

modern day

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, our garments are making by manufacturer, they have a lot of

machine

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which can make garments faster than make by their own hands.

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, in the capital city

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we can find out many affordable furniture or

iteam

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item

to satisfy our needs. In the past, they didn’t

had

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enough resource they can found in their town

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therefore

people had to

created

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by themselves,

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to learn various of techniques in order to satisfy their daily needs. Setting a said the reason accorded with

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trend.

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is happening in my hometown. Taipei city is a capital city in Taiwan, in

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forest of modern buildings we can buy every product we need

such

as sofa, costumes and ingredients to name a few.

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, all we need to do it is going to the shop and pay, so people don’t need to wast their time and power to make it .

Consequently

, people wouldn’t learn any relevant skill.

Naturelly

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Naturally

, those

skill

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have been disappearing in our life. To sum up, in

this

day and age, the marketing can satisfy our needs rapidly, thank

to

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our technology is bring our life

more

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easier than past,

on the other hand

, we lose an opportunity to learn

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ew skill.