Growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent you agree or disagree?

The modern world is

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ra of fast food. The number of people

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getting overweight are

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. Due to

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some might believe that

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it increases a health issue connected

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overweight

overnight

, does putting

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train on the health care. The one group positive about

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more physical

education

lessons in

school

curriculum would be

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ood decision to deal with

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. I agree with the point of view of them.

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comparing past

education

system and present

education

system. It seems

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e pointed in the past,

education

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not surrounded

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tudy. There are many life lesson and occupation

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to survive into

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uture. One of the

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survey

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because of that people are more confident and physically fit.

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edieval era of

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, student

are learn

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how to do agriculture and how to make tools with proper

education

. Because of

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there are physically strong and healthy.

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, the japan is famous for slim and trim people into

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orld. The reason behind it, in the

school

, student

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responsible to stay

school

area neat and clean. Due to

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, there are adapt to nature to work hard to keep

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surrounding

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urronding area clean.

Futheremore

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Furthermore

, Students

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are like blank paper. It would be developed as you craft and if

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the

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chool has more physically active there are more people

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re getting active with them. On other hand, there are not fully get advantaged that physical

education

would be total to neglect the problem of overweight. There are many

area

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should be improved to get overweight people population in control. In a nutshell,

School

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playing

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ital role

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personal lives and how the character would be developed and the person thinking. That might be

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reat idea to put into

education

curriculum

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when it could be connected with persons developed into

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uture.