Task 2: In many countries, people decide to have a child at a later age. Why is this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

With the fast-paced
life
, nowadays, people choose to delay the necessity of having a baby and mostly in developed nations it is evident that young couples avoid having children for at least 5 years after their marriage. And I feel that having children at a later definitely has more merits than demerits.
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essay will elucidate the advantages of the aforementioned fact. Apart from enjoying the personal space, I feel the greatest advantage of having children after 30 or 35 years of maturity is that
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the couple can think and live independently. In fact, they can live
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tress-free
life
, because with a baby a lot of responsibilities come, starting from their schooling, till their own marriage. A parent needs to take care of every minute necessity of their juvenile.
Hence
, if an adult decides to postpone bearing
this
burden for a certain time period
then
, it would allow them to understand and get mentally and even financially get ready to pursue it.
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, a person generally gets married at
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life
of about 25years which is
also
a peak age for career growth of any individual. So, in that duration,
instead
of splitting their attention towards family planning would certainly prove to be a hurdle in their way of progress.
For example
, the report of Human Welfare Development, 2017 of Japan claimed that people with no child perform 30% better at problem-solving than those with one or more children.
Thus
, productivity
also
increases with less family pressure. Despite these many advantages, there is
also
a drawback which might overshadow its advantages. For illustration, if a couple decides to have
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id at the maturity of 35years,
then
when that teenager would reach to his/her adulthood, the couple might be in their late fifties and
this
can lead to a very huge generation gap between the parents and their children. And, it is well-known what a generation gap can lead to; misunderstandings, disputes, and might end up in separation as well. To conclude, I am in complete favour of the opinion and indeed it is advantageous for the ambitious young couples to have a baby at a later
life
.
However
, they should
also
be open to accepting the change and variety in the
next
generation's thought process because it is quite natural that it would persist after
such
an age gap.
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