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Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?

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Expert throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether using the amount of funds income is useful to judge an adult as having a successful soul or not. Personally, I strongly disagree.
This
 essay will discuss why I believe that it is not a good measurement of success based on salary income you have earned. On the one hand, from the aspect of personality development,
although
 a person possesses a lot of cash, he may not have a happy activity as well as an enjoyable social activity. He cannot easily make a close relationship with his friends.
For example
, those in the upper social class group of people would easily divorce. If they have a large amount of fund without intimate friendships or relative support, I trust that they will not have a fantastic and balanced soul.
Therefore
,
this
 is not a beneficial measurement for a wonderful soul.
On the other hand
, having a balanced and positive psychological mind is an excellent tool to claim the human being whether he has a successful activity or not. For those young adults who have positive thinking to solve the problem, they are available to spread the wonderful mind to the other colleagues during a difficult period of time.
For instance
, according to a study of Oxford University, with those types of characteristics people do not have a negative mind even they need to overcome dark and harsh tasks. In conclusion, wealth is one of the tools for people to live in a country which is not the most important factor to review a person to be a successful man or woman.
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