Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

Mobile

phones

are being widely used by kids

over

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the globe these days.

While

these devices can play a role in connectedness and safety, many schools have restricted

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access

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these devices on campus. In my view,

this

is a positive development and I believe that

this

change can make a positive impact on

children

's academic

as well as

physical life.

Firstly

, restrictions on mobile

phones

in the classroom itself can improve concentration

while

learning.

This

is simply because, if there are no sounds of notification beeps or typing on mobile

phones

, students can concentrate fully on what teachers are teaching.

For instance

, if there is a continuous sound of notification pop-ups

then

children

can't control their urge to check notification updates or any social media updates.

As a result

, they fail to pay full attention to learning.

This

can have a

long term

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impact on their academics. So, banning

phones

in the classroom is a positive development.

Lastly

, the ban on the use of

phones

on campus can improve

children

's physical development. The reason for

this

is that, if

phones

are not banned on campus

then

children

will be busy with their

phones

,

instead

of playing on the ground with their friends.

For example

, many

children

can be seen

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a school where mobile

phones

are allowed, playing online games

in

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recess time

instead

of playing on the ground. Because of that, they cannot fully evolve physically.

Hence

, it is a positive sign to ban the use of

phones

in school.

To conclude

, despite

phones

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part of modern lives, I strongly feel that their use should be restricted in order to grow

children

academically

as well as

physically.