Some scientist believe that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the new era, humans made better
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themselves
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built
lots of technology that now they can contact
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planets creatures. In my opinion,
that is
a good idea to discover more the
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and Universe. It took
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ong time to
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communicate
with other planets by humans because
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job needs
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a lot
of patients. Scientist not only contacting other planets creatures but they finding those needs so that people can go and live
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there
they
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, scientist found
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life on Mars for humans and they still searching more about
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lanet with
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already sent some
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astronauts
and rovers with help of
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satellite
satellites
.
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Furthermore
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the other people or aliens is big helpful for human so they can share
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ideas about
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istory of the
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planet
or living style. On the other
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, some of the science engineers think that contacting to the other creatures is not only the bad idea but it can create lots of confusion so in future it would be
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occur
a dangerous situation for
next
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generation
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overnment made Area 51 known as
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lien centre in
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.S. because media said, NASA has lots of alien
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species
and aircraft that government experimenting on them and not
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disclosing
. In case, if any
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worlds
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people will come on
earth
to get their
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team members, it would create a dangerous situation for
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arth. In the end, if government handle or
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maintaining
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everything
not only Area 51 but other planet creatures that would be
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grateful
for
earth
pupils so they can live their
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outside the world or
earth
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraterrestrial
  • technological advancement
  • human progress
  • exchange of knowledge
  • pressing problems
  • environmental issues
  • broadening of humanity’s horizon
  • external existence
  • collaborative
  • security threat
  • dominate
  • unpredictability
  • malevolent intentions
  • colonization
  • exploitation
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