Public transports in many countries have improved. People should use public transport to support pollution control initiatives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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The public transportation system of the 20th century is more rigid and safe as

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to past decades and still many countries trying to improve

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we will discuss the various benefits of using public

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our environments and how

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will help us in reducing pollution.

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, every city does not matter

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big or small have its own public transportation system which is way much improved. Going

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system at a greater extent.

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on public

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we will consume less fuel which means less carbon emission in

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tmosphere.

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people commuting in their personal vehicle and using other means of publicly owned

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conjunctions on roads which means less traffic jam, that

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ot of money on fuel, which

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by their car when running ideal in traffic, that

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limate by letting

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gases in the air. At

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greatest asset of human being precious time which they going to save when they are not wasting time in traffic jams.

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, in some places inside the city it is not possible to reach with public means for that we definitely need other means of

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worst place to live

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century in term of environment. We should at least try to adapt to changes like using public

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more often and make a positive change toward a less polluted world.

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