Some people think that schools should concentrate on academic classes, because they are helpful for future career. And they think music and sports classes are not useful.

Some people argue that academic subjects act as a key role in

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uture career that they should be laid emphasis on teaching at schools.

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others believe that

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as well as

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education

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of the essence to students in terms of physical and mental health. In

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essay, I am going to explain understandable justifications for both two views and give my solid motives why I reckon that both of them should be equally concentrated on. On the one hand, It is unequivocal that academic subjects play a pivotal role

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each individual student. To commence with, students highly stand a chance of getting well-paid employment in

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ierce job market when they have a profound grasp of academic subjects. In a developed society with

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dvancement of technology, a plethora of recruiters

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intellectual employees with high qualified level with a view to meeting the strict and complicated standard.

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, students who have a passion for becoming a biologist, doctor, attorney,… might have opportunities to attend their aspired tertiary school and promote in job career as they obtain

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ertain level of academic grades and knowledge. On the one hand, artistic and

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education should be encouraged to convey at schools since they are significantly instrumental to students. In term of artistic subjects, they could stimulate self-expression, creativity along with cognitive development and sense of individual identity.

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, sports subjects help adolescence sticking with regular physical activities, which acts as an outlet for releasing the pressures of studying as well as those of daily grind and assist them

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studying more efficiently. According to research, students who engage in

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activities are likely to get strong focus and higher grades rather those who do not. In conclusion,

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high regard by societies as they can provide a bright future, artistic and sports education help enhancing a better physical and psychological lifestyle for stu