It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?
It is often considered that exercise is beneficial for individuals;
hence
, it shall be made mandatory for the academies to include structured courses on the same for the
adolescents. I strongly agree with the statement as gymnastics not only improve people general physical health but Remove the article
apply
also
aid in developing their soft skills.
Perhaps the most important advantage of physical education is e
nhancement in one's fitness. Add an article
an
This
is because, on b
iological front, it improves circulation of blood which Add an article
the
further
rejuvenates the entire body and decreases the toxin level for c
ontrolled working of all senses of human. On Add an article
the
e
conomy front, it Add an article
the
help
nations to reduce their spending on health infrastructure. Change the verb form
helps
For example
, a report published in Times of India exhibits that individual who exercise
daily for an hour Change the verb form
exercises
are
50% less prone to the heart attacks than others. Change the verb form
is
Although
many feel that time is precious and ought not to be wasted at such
activities, the real significance of exercising is realized during old ages.
Secondly
, gymnasium also
provide
people with Change the verb form
provides
p
lethora of awareness to develop their emotional quotient. Add an article
a
In other words
, being constantly involved in varied activities of sports encourage individuals to display their skills such
as team work
, effective and clear communication, leadership, and sense of responsibility. Correct your spelling
teamwork
For instance
, a growing body of research suggests that p
roportion of Add an article
the
p
opulation who participates in some kind of sports are 50% more likely to attain the top position in a company than who do not train.
To conclude, while being active in sports can provide better immunity to an individual, it Add an article
the
also
creates awareness on various life living criterion which are essential for one's growth. I recommend that governments must suo moto take cognizance of such
health related
issues, and take actions Add a hyphen
health-related
such
as mandating every schools
to incorporate courses to Change to a singular noun
school
soleley
focus on the sports. If I was a government, I would develop special schools focusing on physically training public.Correct your spelling
solely
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