It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

It is often considered that exercise is beneficial for individuals;
hence
, it shall be made mandatory for the academies to include structured courses on the same for
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adolescents. I strongly agree with the statement as gymnastics not only improve people general physical health but
also
aid in developing their soft skills. Perhaps the most important advantage of physical education is
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nhancement in one's fitness.
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iological front, it improves circulation of blood which
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rejuvenates the entire body and decreases the toxin level for
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ontrolled working of all senses of human. On
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conomy front, it
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nations to reduce their spending on health infrastructure.
For example
, a report published in Times of India exhibits that individual who
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daily for an hour
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50% less prone to the heart attacks than others.
Although
many feel that time is precious and ought not to be wasted at
such
activities, the real significance of exercising is realized during old ages.
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, gymnasium
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people with
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lethora of awareness to develop their emotional quotient.
In other words
, being constantly involved in varied activities of sports encourage individuals to display their skills
such
as
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, effective and clear communication, leadership, and sense of responsibility.
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, a growing body of research suggests that
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opulation who participates in some kind of sports are 50% more likely to attain the top position in a company than who do not train. To conclude, while being active in sports can provide better immunity to an individual, it
also
creates awareness on various life living criterion which are essential for one's growth. I recommend that governments must suo moto take cognizance of
such
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issues, and take actions
such
as mandating every
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to incorporate courses to
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focus on the sports. If I was a government, I would develop special schools focusing on physically training public.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • physical health
  • mental health
  • compulsory
  • instill
  • regular exercise
  • participation
  • teamwork
  • discipline
  • resilience
  • academic studies
  • concentration
  • focus
  • childhood obesity
  • motor skills
  • coordination
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