Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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of reporters towards celebrities is a matter of concern. In order to have name and fame, their personal
life
's are put at cost. I agree with the statement that professional
life
must be distinguished from personal
life
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, I will put forward discussions with my consent by discussing both
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notions.
To begin
with, actors or leaders are followed by reporters anywhere and everywhere they go. Whether it is a movie launch or a family get together their privacy is always at stake.
As a result
of which they are forced to appoint bodyguards to protect themselves. Even, star kids cannot go out in public alone as media follows them everywhere. Most of the time it happens that
instead
of showing true picture reporters exaggerate the news in order to grab more Television Rating Point. Apart from
this
, fear of having a conflicting situation in the crowd in the presence of news reporters
also
concerns actors, as it may tarnish
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image.
Furthermore
, some people are of the view that famous people
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up their personal lives to
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ublic in order to have sympathy and publicity.
This
is appropriate to some extent, as in today's time celebs are hardly concerned with the content of what they are doing and priorities money over everything. But, one should not forget that it is the public who popularizes them
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like youth nowadays hardly likes a
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or biography based movies,
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they prefer to watch violence. To conclude, I wholeheartedly agree that unfair treatment of media has muddled up with famous people's
life
. And restrictions on them must be imposed while approaching any celebrity.
Submitted by Shilpa Suri on

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