Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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of reporters towards celebrities is a matter of concern. In order to have name and fame, their personal

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with, actors or leaders are followed by reporters anywhere and everywhere they go. Whether it is a movie launch or a family get together their privacy is always at stake.

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of which they are forced to appoint bodyguards to protect themselves. Even, star kids cannot go out in public alone as media follows them everywhere. Most of the time it happens that

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of showing true picture reporters exaggerate the news in order to grab more Television Rating Point. Apart from

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, fear of having a conflicting situation in the crowd in the presence of news reporters

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concerns actors, as it may tarnish

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, some people are of the view that famous people

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ublic in order to have sympathy and publicity.

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is appropriate to some extent, as in today's time celebs are hardly concerned with the content of what they are doing and priorities money over everything. But, one should not forget that it is the public who popularizes them

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like youth nowadays hardly likes a

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or biography based movies,

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they prefer to watch violence. To conclude, I wholeheartedly agree that unfair treatment of media has muddled up with famous people's

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. And restrictions on them must be imposed while approaching any celebrity.

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