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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different ages and cultures together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#people #music #ages #cultures
In
this
 modern era, the world is changing a lot as compared to the past and
music
 is the best way to enjoy
with
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eachother
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each other
 nowadays. I personally believe that it helps to connect different type of people together.
This
 essay will discuss how
music
 will bring
everyone
 near.
however
, some people think that
music
 is like magic and it attracts all type of generations.
Firstly
,
everyone
 like songs and it is very common in all type of cultures and it is
also
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est way to reduce stress. Due to
this
 reason
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people prefer to listen
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this
 thing in every function in the group.
Secondly
, they can
also
 discuss their view while they are enjoying
this
 thing in a crowd and it is best stree killing medicine. Because it is scientifically proven.
For example
, as per the Oxford University report, in 70 percentage function
music
 help to stay
everyone
 at
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ame place.
However
, due to numerous
marits
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merits
markets
 of songs the government
also
 have to organise free shows. So all types of humans can come and they can enjoy in a group. Apart from
this
,
m
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ilitary
also
use
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petrotic
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patriotic
retham
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them
 to motivate their army groups. As per the 2016 government report, most of the politician use different types of
music
 while they are doing
campaining
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campaigning
. So they can easily attract more public. Overall, it's human nature to stay in
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roup while listening
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the songs. To conclude,
this
esssay
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essay
 discussed how
music
play
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s
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ignificant role tov connects
everyone
 and have fully agreed with it. We all have to
promot
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promote
 more musical events. Because it is beneficial for the society as well as for the country.
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