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Some people argue children should stay in school until the age of 18 while others think that 14 years is long enough. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many feel that compulsory schooling should extend to the
age
 of 18, while others feel 14 is sufficient. In my opinion, there are good reasons to prioritise starting work but it is more important for one’s future to at least graduate high
school
. Those who support parental rights argue that if college is not a realistic option, dropping out of
school
 at 14 gives one a better chance of learning a valuable trade. In an ideal world, every student would go to university and become a great success but in the real world
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the majority of individuals do not
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 in higher education. The years spent cramming in high
school
 are wasted on subjects like algebra and history, having no tangible impact on their future livelihood. Give these students the opportunity to enter the workforce earlier and they will someday be able to master a craft and become a skilled electrician, plumber, or chef. Those jobs might, in the final analysis, pay better than positions open to many university graduates. Regardless, the value of finishing high institute is in the world of infinite possibilities it affords. Not every graduate goes on to university but even a high
school
 diploma makes it both easier to land a quality job and eventually get a promotion. Depending on the country and the government funding available, many high
school
 graduates will be able to attend academy regardless of their socioeconomic status and maybe the
first
 generation in their family to do so. Even if they opt to enter the workforce after the
age
 of 18, they will have the possibility of later returning to higher education with a clearer understanding of what vocation they want to study.
This
 opportunity alone is enough to justify mandatory attendance until
age
 18. In conclusion, it is a privilege that should be enforced to attend
school
 until
age
 18. There will be cases where
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chool is a waste of time but there will be more instances where a basic level of education makes the difference between a mean and
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elevated existence.
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