Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

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Today violence levels are very high in the movies which create serious problems. Nobody can ignore its presence in society. Now a time has come to think seriously about it. Movies are undivided part of our day-to-day's life. There are opinions like society culture reflects in the movie or movie culture reflect in society.

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their mind.

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