Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some people claim that
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should bring pleasure and can be a temporary phenomenon, while others strongly believe that certainty and stability are
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ain features of the modern working place. In
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this
topic. On the one hand, most modern people are sure that
job
satisfaction is the crucial factor of
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job
evaluation. It can be explained by the fact that for almost everyone it is impossible to work effectively and productively in
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ase when they strongly dislike or even hate what they must do.
For instance
, some people have no talent and wish to work in
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arketing industry as they feel themselves so upset when they make customers to buy something useless or to create impulsive purchases. It seems to them that they behave dishonestly, and
this
feeling makes them unhappy.
That is
why if people like what they do, they will conduct it effectively.
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, they will feel
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better at large.
On the other hand
, some people prefer to make ordinary, routine or even boring
job
, if only they are sure that their company is reliable and know that
this
working relationship will be long term.
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, not everyone considers
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ob of accouters or lawyers as something exciting and bringing satisfaction in
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life.
However
, it is the well-known fact that these professions are well-paid and there will be always high demand
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specialists in these spheres.
Thus
, young people decide to listen to their parents’ advice and choose
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erspective and stable career, rather than
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reative one. To sum up, some people strongly believe that it is more important to get pleasure from
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Although
, there is no doubt that the
job
satisfaction will make life better,
nevertheless
, I prefer to support another point of view which claims that security and stability are main factors in the working place evaluation.
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