Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, some people claim that
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should bring pleasure and can be a temporary phenomenon, while others strongly believe that certainty and stability are
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ain features of the modern working place. In
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topic. On the one hand, most modern people are sure that
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satisfaction is the crucial factor of
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evaluation. It can be explained by the fact that for almost everyone it is impossible to work effectively and productively in
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ase when they strongly dislike or even hate what they must do.
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, some people have no talent and wish to work in
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arketing industry as they feel themselves so upset when they make customers to buy something useless or to create impulsive purchases. It seems to them that they behave dishonestly, and
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feeling makes them unhappy.
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why if people like what they do, they will conduct it effectively.
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, they will feel
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better at large.
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, some people prefer to make ordinary, routine or even boring
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, if only they are sure that their company is reliable and know that
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working relationship will be long term.
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, not everyone considers
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ob of accouters or lawyers as something exciting and bringing satisfaction in
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life.
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, it is the well-known fact that these professions are well-paid and there will be always high demand
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specialists in these spheres.
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, young people decide to listen to their parents’ advice and choose
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erspective and stable career, rather than
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reative one. To sum up, some people strongly believe that it is more important to get pleasure from
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, there is no doubt that the
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satisfaction will make life better,
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, I prefer to support another point of view which claims that security and stability are main factors in the working place evaluation.
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