Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some people claim that capital
punishment
should be prohibited, while another group of people strongly believe that some kinds of crimes should be punished only by death. In
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wn opinion. On the
one
hand, capital
punishment
must be banned as it is too cruel. It can be proved by the fact that a person has no chance to regret and, as a consequence, to change his or her attitude, personality and life at large.
Moreover
, some murders and other heavy crimes sometimes happen accidentally, and a guilty person maybe did not want to commit it.
For example
, a person killed another
one
just in the process of
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protection.
However
, laws and courts in some countries consider it like an aimed murder.
That is
why capital
punishment
should be excluded from
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court practice.
On the other hand
, not every crime should be forgotten, and some guilty people deserve to be killed cause some of them can be mentally ill people.
For instance
, in
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one
man who killed young women and children just for his pleasure. When he was caught by the police it would be insane and extremely dangerous to let him
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stay alive.
The capital
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punishment
was explained in
this
case by the fact that there was no guarantee that after his prison period he would change and become healthy. According to
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death can be counted as the
punishment
for some serious crimes. To sum up, there are two different
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capital
punishment
. Some people think
that is
should be banned as it is brutal and nobody deserves it, while others see it
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only
one
way for punishing for some serious crimes cause not everyone can understand the awfulness of committed things and change himself or herself. In my opinion, capital
punishment
can be used, but only
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rare occasions and all cases should be
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from different perspectives and aspects.
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