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Some studies suggest criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, the best way to reduce crime levels is to educate people in prisons so that they can get a job after they are released from prison. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

#studies #criminals #level #education #reason #crime #levels #people #prisons #job #prison
Concerning the issue of
crime
’s bad influence
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 society, people hold different views. An army of people reckons that prisoner education while they are still in prison is really necessary to prevent
crime
 rates and help them get new chances after being released. From my perspective, I strongly agree with
this
 statement for many convincing reasons. On the one hand, it can be seen that committing a
crime
 often happen with bad people and ignorant people. To details, when students that they do not have much attention from their parents, they are more likely
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ontact with a bad target. Since
then
, students will be formed some terrible habits like skipped school and lazier in acquiring knowledge.
Besides
,
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ducation system
need
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 to put more moral lesson into study programs in primary school immediately. These will help control
students’s
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 character and help them avoid falling into evils.
On the other hand
, with the opinion of
educate
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 prisoner as early as they are still staying there
also
 a good method. Prisoners have to be trained to do manual work and joining some public service. It
not just makes
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 them forget criminal thoughts, but
also
 help them get familiar looking for a stable job after
released
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.
Likewise
, prisoners need to be
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about
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 law lessons. Namely, they will feel
trully
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truly
 to be shy if they commit a
crime
 again while they taught in terms of judgments that they could make mistakes in the future. In summary, for the reasons mentioned above, it can be affirmed that declining
crime
 is
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essential.
Thus
, it is highly recommended that the
gorvnment
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government
 should create more efficient measures to deleted all dangerous
crime
 for each country.
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