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for centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. with the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

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The phenomenon -
Computer
 describes the whole modern era. Every latest
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 been build using hardware components that use motherboard - the brain of
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omputer. To reach up to its root fundamental, People should aware
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equired
computer
 knowledge base.
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, there are still
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ew old-fashioned people left, who are against
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using computers and they do not agree to gain
this
 knowledge with other key subjects. Beyond doubt, There are several compelling reasons why people need to consider
computer
 subject with other key courses. As we all aware of on-going COVID situation, almost every businesses and market are suffering
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ecession.
As a result
, Many workers suddenly lost their jobs and staying at their home to avoid spreading coronavirus, which is good for health but it makes people think on how to cope up with a financial crisis in nearer future.
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, The only industry is currently in demand
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 Information Technology. Every business is now switching to either virtual base or remotely, where people can continuously work from home and that has increased the demand for software skills. Another core reason to consider
computer
 subject is market of Artificial Intelligence - A technology
that is
 made of entire software programming languages. Per the
last
 NASA research, America has launched Space shuttle to Moon, which is entirely operated by Robot and the mission was completely successful. That proves to believe that everything is possible by adding software knowledge with Mathematics, Science, Reading and Writing skills. On the other side, Some people have
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ld-tend mindset to avoid using computers as its radiation will affect on the human body.
As a result
, Human needs to suffer from serious diseases
such
 as cancer or brain tumour. Haward medical university scientist has published the research paper by stating that If Individual stays in 10-metre radiation from wireless equipment, it will directly affect
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their heart and brain together. Agglomerating all the points elaborated above, both sides have their own splendid offering.
However
, I
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arly age rather than avoid it regardless of spending unnecessary time on playing games on
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omputer.
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