Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While some people think that they should stringently

controlled

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the

noise

being created, others think

noise

should be freely made. Personally, I agree with the former point of view.

To begin

with, there are reasons why individuals have the rights to make

noise

as they prefer.

Firstly

, creating

noise

helps people express their feeling.

For instance

, in Vietnam, people keen on signing karaoke loudly together or participate in recreational activities to relax after a long week of work.

Secondly

, making sound is a way to get attention from a large number of individuals by raising their voice out loud.

However

, making

noise

unconditionally has several drawbacks.

Noise

pollution is considered as one of the major concerns of the current world. It causes not only health issues for employers who work at construction areas

such

as deafness, but

also

for people living nearby

such

as stress level, sleep disturbance.

Furthermore

, freedom of making

noise

leads to disruption of working or studying.

For example

, a student revising for exams will be distracted when his

neighbors

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singing too loud.

On the contrary

, it is undeniable that

noise

regulation should be established. While it is true that strictly controlling the

noise

can prevent people enjoyment, there are still solutions for it. Walls and windows are invented to block the

noise

, which allows individuals doing recreational activities. Controlling those annoying sounds

also

beneficial affect

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society. It helps to reduce health problems for people. If strict law is given to prohibit

noise making

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in the working area, it will make workers focus on their work as well as reducing the risk of becoming deaf in the future.

Moreover

, handling excessive

noise

creates a polite, peaceful

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. People are no worries about losing sleep or being disturbed by the drum, the music sounds from their

neighbors

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. In conclusion, the aforementioned provided arguments in

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of both views.

Although

there are several benefits of freely making

noise

, in my view, it is a much more ideal if those noises are controlled in reasonable ways.