It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Weight related
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Weight-related
health
problems have been a huge problem for the last
decades. Consuption
of fast Correct your spelling
Consumption
food
is an obvious reason as to why people are getting fat nowadays. In this
essay, I will explain why we need new regulations for reducing fast
Add a hyphen
fast-food
food
consumption and therefore
obesity.
Firstly
, fast food
companies should held
accountable for the changes they have been causing in public Change the verb form
be held
hold
health
. To illustrate, governments can mandate new tax
policies to fast food
chains for each item produced. Due to increased financial implications per food
item, these chains would be required to focus on producing quality food
rather than quantity. This
ultimately would result in less production with whole
Correct your spelling
wholesome
Verify preposition usage
of
Secondly
, p
ublic needs to be made aware of what they are putting in their mouths. Add an article
the
In other words
, having to spend more money on junk food
will make them question while they make purchasing decisions. For instance
, most governments have recently placed tax
regulations on alcoholic beverages and in return, people are less prone to consume alcohol during weekdays. Therefore
, a similar tax
principle could easily be applied to fast food
sector as well. As a result
, nutricious
foods and diets can be organically promoted among Correct your spelling
nutritious
p
ublic due to less Add an article
the
tax
and cheaper prices.
In conclusion, I have summarized that creating new tax
policies for both fast food
production processes and consumption are integral in preventing obesity. I also
believe that public health
can be protected by imposing t
ax on convenience Add an article
a
food
. If fast moving
foods are given Add a hyphen
fast-moving
f
ree pass as they are today, we are likely to suffer worse when it comes to public Add an article
a
health
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