You recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit.

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Dear

Tairan

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Taiwan

, I hope you are doing well. I am very excited to let you know about my new resident where I moved

last

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month. The reason

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for

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shifting is my new job. I have joined an international company as a Manager which is located at Dhanmondi. My previous residence is quite far from my current workstation and

let

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me late

for

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apply

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many times to reach

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apply

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office

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the office

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;

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, I decided to stay near to my office location. It is a multistoried building and I am living on the 10th floor.

this

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apartment has

lift

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a lift

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and all other modern facilities. My flat is spacious and includes three

bedroom

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bedrooms

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along with

washroom

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a washroom

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& balcony, dining room, drawing room and kitchen. The best

think

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thing

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about my place is you can have your tea

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balcony

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the balcony

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with seeing the beautiful

scenerio

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scenario

scenery

of Dhanmondi lake.

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, I decorated the house with green

plant

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plants

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and

colorful

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colourful

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mirror

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mirrors

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light

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; these arrangements have made my home a dreamy place to live. I would be glad if you stay some days with me at my new address in your

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summer vacation. I expect to have great fun while you come to my home. Please let me know when you want to come. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

214 words

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The Closing

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